Leah at School for a Day
Here in Hawaii because of the interesting climate, the plants are so much different to those in Georgia and The Congo. The colors of the plants like the yellow hibiscus and the beautiful patterns of the ferns were so exquisite and I am sure Father wished he had these plants in his garden. Father told me, “these plants needed lots of sun and continuous watering.” As I walked through the campus I spotted many workers of the school trimming and watering the plants, which showed that Father was right. As Father walked through the campus I noticed his happy facial expression and a bounce in his step because it was like we where walking through a botanical garden with perfectly pruned trees and fragrant flowers in every corner. I really liked this school because it seems to be nature centered and my father also enjoyed it.
3 comments:
Sup Kayne. I dont mean to be critical, but would Leah, a girl raised in Georgia, really know the names of plants like the Hibuscis. Other then that, good job.
I liked how you wrote through the eyes of Leah, since I followed the same basis for my writing. Describing the native plants here to Hawaii I think was key in order to portray the character of Leah
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